Magpie Tales
Mag #117
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The Meal, 1891, by Paul Gauguin
Did you wash your hands?
Yes Mama.
Did you finish your chores?
Yes Mama.
Did you see your father leave?
Yes Mama.
Boys, you will have to feed the goats now.
Yes Mama.
And Katia, you will learn how to make the cook-up.
Yes Mama.
We will be fine. We will be just fine.
Yes Mama.
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Laurel. Happy Mother's Day everyone!!!
Oh! Beautiful and sad. Where indeed is papa? I focused on the mama but you've said so much more without saying much at all. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Yvonne. Mom's are strong!!
DeleteThe dad's absence is felt, and mom picks up their hearts. This is a great piece for today.
ReplyDeleteIt's what we do, huh? Have a great Mother's Day!
DeleteThere's food for thought...
ReplyDeleteI like to make you think:)
DeleteVery lovely take...I like the short conversation, yet tells a lot more ~
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Thanks Grace. I'll have to visit your take.
DeleteSad...good.
ReplyDeleteHappy Mommies Day, Gail.
Deletei hope they don't forget to feed the goats. hungry goats are trouble.
ReplyDeleteNow there's the one animal we didn't have on the farm, but I hear that they will eat anything.
DeleteThis is so sad but at the same time such an example of a mama's strength. Thank you SO much for this. It is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Hannah. Happy Mother's Day to you, too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Hannah and Laurie for your kind words! Have a great day!
DeleteOh my gosh, this is so powerful, soft, and true. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shawna for visiting me!
DeletePity the children who grow up without fathers ... cheer the mothers who pick up the pieces and move on! Happy Day!
ReplyDeleteI don't do the writing. My fingers do it. They lean toward to dark side or an extreme twist.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I think.
So much responsibility for kids to take on. Great interpretation of the pic!
ReplyDeleteugh...after my day this is a hard dose of reality...wpent it taking a boy to have mothers day lunch with his mother at social services....sad tale...tightly told...
ReplyDeleteYes they will! fun, thanks-
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
ReplyDeleteexcellent- so much in so fewwords.
ReplyDeleteNicely written, and this way of life now for them, will make them stronger!
ReplyDeleteBless the moms that are left behind to deal, no matter what the cause. Hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day. I love the Gaugin. As fresh and robust as though it had just been painted. :D
ReplyDeleteA palpable absence, well portrayed.
ReplyDeleteBetter off without him
ReplyDeleteWow. That packs a wallop. : (
ReplyDeleteA hard hitting reflection of life in general these days. How great to see Mama up for the challenge. Many a mother would cave under the pressure. Thanks for this inspirational response, Laurel. =D
ReplyDeleteAbsent dads and super-mums. And some do it without the cape! Nicely penned, Laurel.
ReplyDeleteOn best behaviour for Mothers Day? Love it!
ReplyDeleteAbsent fathers. Universal, aren't they?
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