Magpie Tales
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I am the Beloved
Complex and thoughtful
Creative and obsessive
Lover of beauty, lover of God
Compassionate and selfish
Shackled and free
Fragile and strong
Dreamer
Dust
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Laurel. Grateful.
this is a gorgeous poem. I'll have to try this format also! Thanks!
ReplyDeletethese are beautiful components of self
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much love...
Very nice. I love the idea of we all being "dreamer dust."
ReplyDeleteI love this! You've shown the duality that comprises the human condition so well.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't comment directly on your post because it wouldn't let me without a google plus profile, but I wanted to let you know that I LOVE nonets and found yours so astoundingly poignant. It is so magnificently written.
DeleteWhat a delightful taper to the formatting of the words!
ReplyDeleteLove the contrasts and the ending...Dreamer Dust
ReplyDeleteWhat an effective use of contrast....and the way the words are arranged creates a visual form that looks almost like a heart!
ReplyDeleteExcellent dance of the light and the dark
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the contrasts for we all have two sides..
ReplyDeleteLovely. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteEspecially liking the first line, and of course, where it takes us.
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Excellent...
ReplyDeleteEnjoyable and visual. Well done!
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