Sunday, April 6, 2014

Identity understood

 Magpie Tales
Mag 214

 
photo by Kelsey Hannah

I am the Beloved
Complex and thoughtful
Creative and obsessive
Lover of beauty, lover of God
Compassionate and selfish
Shackled and free
Fragile and strong
Dreamer
Dust



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Laurel. Grateful.

15 comments:

  1. this is a gorgeous poem. I'll have to try this format also! Thanks!

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  2. these are beautiful components of self

    have a nice Sunday

    much love...

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  3. Very nice. I love the idea of we all being "dreamer dust."

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  4. I love this! You've shown the duality that comprises the human condition so well.

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    1. I couldn't comment directly on your post because it wouldn't let me without a google plus profile, but I wanted to let you know that I LOVE nonets and found yours so astoundingly poignant. It is so magnificently written.

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  5. What a delightful taper to the formatting of the words!

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  6. Love the contrasts and the ending...Dreamer Dust

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  7. What an effective use of contrast....and the way the words are arranged creates a visual form that looks almost like a heart!

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  8. Excellent dance of the light and the dark

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  9. I enjoyed the contrasts for we all have two sides..

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  10. Especially liking the first line, and of course, where it takes us.

    =)

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  11. Enjoyable and visual. Well done!

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